Crying Out For You
24 May, 2005
Author: Heaven
all alone,
she cries out in pain,
afraid to go,
afraid to stay,
wondering if she can make it for one more day.
promise her your love,
but only give her hate,
thought you were sent from above,
she should of known better,
now its to late,
you kiss her so softly,
and tell her you care,
you said you'd stay forever,
now your not there,
she wanted you to hold her,
but you only pushed her away,
never tking time,
to hear what she had to say,
her screams are silent,
and you dont see her tears,
she hopes that you will love her,
and understand all of her fears,
you told her this was love,
but that just wasnt true,
now shes all alone,
and shes crying out for you...
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| James (69.208.213.112) -- Saturday, July 16 2005, 08:04 pm very nice,it was so sad though =( , your a very good writer Heaven, i hope you keep up the good work... p.s. remember me? =) |
| heaven (208.182.192.101) -- Thursday, August 4 2005, 06:07 pm hey!of course i remember u!how r u?thanx 4 the comment!talk to u later ~sadgirl |
| xx (10.40.15.211) -- Saturday, August 20 2005, 04:21 pm love is great to have and bad to lose... even worse then that is to love some1 and not beeing able to be with them ... its great |
| nakata (59.144.25.92) -- Monday, August 22 2005, 12:44 pm Can say only this much Wonderful job u have done keep it up. Thanks |
| aman. (117.198.4.179) -- Thursday, November 25 2010, 08:38 pm its amazing.... its seems like this whole poem is for me only..love is painfull, but more difficult to understand when somebody stops loving u... |
| mental (70.63.232.22) -- Wednesday, December 1 2010, 12:34 am like the imagery of love coming never getting there. the hope of love and caring and the loss |
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