The Mall Incident
25 May, 2005
Author: Miztrebor
The insecurity of it all,
Is builing up inside me.
The security at the mall,
Beat down inside me.
A person like me
They never thought could do any wrong,
Until i rode around in that purple and pink thong.
Only that i wore,
Not a hat nor
My sword.
The man brought me down
To his home down south.
Then let me go,
If i was good again.
But i went back out
Into society,
I needed to go real bad.
I had to take a pee.
They took me back in
Since i preformed that sin.
The man took me down.
And made me wear a white gown.
This room is full of pads.
It's punishment for me.
They think it will help,
but it's just where i've always wanted to be.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| barb (209.112.22.125) -- Friday, May 27 2005, 03:15 am I don't see any humour in this. It went over my head I guess. Can you explain what's going for this dumb blonde. lol |
| miztrebor (163.153.64.30) -- Friday, May 27 2005, 04:07 pm The funny part is the irony at the end mostly. Using a padded room for punishment. It would just be extremely cool. At least that's what io think. I'm am sorry that you didn't find it funny, but not all poetry is interperated the same way by all people. |
| Amber (163.153.64.30) -- Friday, May 27 2005, 05:05 pm How does someone not understand it? I think it's quite humerous...besides the fact that I never wanna see you in a purple and pink thong...But anyway, very lovely...very lovely. |
| barb (216.191.60.95) -- Saturday, May 28 2005, 12:37 am Being old and disabled I guess makes it hard to see what others see.Your writing is good but like I said. I'm a blonde. lol Thanks for explaining. |
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