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Read My Heart
28 May, 2005
Author: Moonstarshine

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If you gently hold me close
feel inside
what goes..
the hearbeats
matching with yours
it would surely
show..
what we both want
us to know..
And as I look up
to see what lies
lock my gaze with
your eyes..
I am able to read
volumes of sadness
in them ..concealed
a broken heart
shedding tears
After all that is said
pages of our souls..
tattered but read..
In the end
what remains
are my feelings of you..
pure..untouched..true..
I love you.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (63.25.150.191) -- Sunday, May 29 2005, 07:17 pm

Refreshing Poem, I Love, The Love, You Show

It's good to read a heart, that knows, spring and summer turn, to winter, yet, you have a heart that can stand the changes, for your, love is true. Excellent thoughts of a loving heart with strong contact, with its soul.
MS (203.81.207.13) -- Monday, May 30 2005, 03:55 pm

Thank You

love without that contact of ones soul with another...is not love...and lucky are those whose souls are read ...and I sure am. Thanks MV.
Tarna (66.72.31.26) -- Wednesday, June 8 2005, 05:51 am

As Time passes....

..it seems as time passes and the true memories fade the feelings that were envoked are what remains. I hope this feeling of love stays with you always. Great tribute to the feeling.
kristyna dewald (205.238.212.242) -- Wednesday, April 4 2007, 10:16 pm

for my boyfriend and I

May I please give this poem to my boyfriend!

Thank you
 
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