raps

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Postby Luc » Thu Jul 03, 2003 8:53 pm

ok i was just thinking.. and came up with an idea. an idea that mixes both the rap seesions ryan made up and dreamers idea of the whole week contast, and post the first that comes to mind forum in the open forum and just came up with this..

a person starts if off.. by saying a word. or better put a topic. now the person then makes up a rap for it. rap as in the hip hop thing. then that person picks another word/topic and the next person makes a rap for it.

i really like the other rap thing but this way we dont have to "beat up" on each other and just rap out the topic. ....

i'll give off the first topic/word.. next person comes up with a rap for this topic thing then they put a topic/word(it could be more than just one word)



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Postby Seizuh Da Rappa » Thu Jul 03, 2003 9:31 pm

I care when you're there but can't bear this despair
That is here when you're near and appear with a tear
In your eye when you cry and apply your goodbye
And leave me on my knee and agree that you're free
So long I was wrong we can not get along
But how you allow me to bow away now
Bothers me, I'm not free, that I can guarantee
But guess what I will cut myself in the gut
Like I said I bled red go ahead leave instead
It will spread to my head till at last I am dead

yeah! That's how you make a really horrible rap! yeah!!! skills!!! only i could have made something so corny :)

next topic is... umm... hate. Yeah, I'm a bringer of joy all the time, i know.
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Postby Luc » Thu Jul 03, 2003 10:12 pm

lol thats good.. hmm hate huh..


hate, blah, i'll massecre your ass,
throw you in the ditch and forget you like i did my past.
with the joyness in my eye,
pink with that naterual high,
all this poop is mine!

thats all i came up with :?

and i liked that rap seizuh :lol:

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Postby Dreamer » Thu Jul 03, 2003 11:44 pm

I don't mind this... Only lets keep the language PG rated I don't want all the cussing on my site.. I allowed it in the past Rap one but I don't want it again and really don't feel it adds anything to what is being said. So it is not necessary..

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Postby Dreamer » Fri Jul 04, 2003 12:02 am

Graveyard calls, death falls, in the school in the malls
shootin guns, have fun, turn around then you run
blades set, tempers get, foolish minds will regret
you turn your head, then your dead, last words finally said

Never mind what you find
Graveyard calls to sickened minds
clever talk, walk the walk
In the end your graveyard chalk

play the games, your insane, your life goes down the drain
your mistake, life's fake, mothers hell you choose to make
fight more, fatal door, blood on pavement and on floor
food on plate, its your fate, chose to open satan's gate

Never mind what you find
the graveyard calls to sickened minds
clever talk walked the walk
and in the end your still graveyard chalk

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Postby Seizure » Sat Jul 05, 2003 4:13 am

Dreamer wrote:I don't mind this... Only lets keep the language PG rated I don't want all the cussing on my site.. I allowed it in the past Rap one but I don't want it again and really don't feel it adds anything to what is being said. So it is not necessary..

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That's great... good thing I didn't cuss right? Or were you not talking to me there?
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Postby Dreamer » Sat Jul 05, 2003 2:40 pm

I didn't even notice if you ever posted to the other rap thread that I put the explicit content wrning on. (still haven't but I will be looking there next ..just cause I wanna..)

You all know how I am about my site and how I like it to be able to be viewed by all ages. I am not quite as picky about the forum but... As I think most people know, I took off the word filter because I trusted it not to be abused. I really don't feel I should have to put it back on. An occasional word or two doesn't bother me but excessive use does.

But no, it was directed at everyone in general not you personally .. If it was personal (to anyone) it would have been a private email :)

It was just meant as a gentle reminder to those who might not know of my feelings about what "I" consider to be un-necessary language choices.

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Postby Dreamer » Mon Jul 07, 2003 10:47 am

Dang guessed we scared people right off this thread.....
or maybe I stole the thrill of rap when I said little to no cussing
hmmmmm.
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Postby Luc » Mon Jul 07, 2003 5:01 pm

perhaps its just the lack of people who like that genra. personaly i dont like it.. but i think its a fun way to spend time. the whole rap lingo and what not.. very amusing but i guess i'm the only one who finds it like that. heh..
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Mon Jul 07, 2003 5:22 pm

actully dreamer, i would if i could, but i suck at rapping! and anyways i think harly any people can rap to "fury"
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