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Dear Mum
7 December, 2004
Author: Mike

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I may not say I love you,
But you know I really do.
I may not show my feelings
But if I did you'd be reeling.

I may not kiss and hug you
As much as you'd like me to.
I may not always do what I should
But you know if I could, I would.

I may not always smile,
And this may last a while
But what will last eternally
Is the love between you and me.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah0 (204.112.162.35) -- Wednesday, January 5 2005, 10:54 am

......

Love between a parent and child is somethign that can never be broken its always there.
Raimee. (80.5.40.153) -- Monday, March 7 2005, 10:18 pm

Beautiful.

:)
LBK (84.9.36.131) -- Saturday, March 12 2005, 12:43 am

...

I do not, and don't think I have ever loved my mum or dad. But it doesn't matter, I get my love from my friends, from you...Always remember this poem and remember the love between you and your mum. No matter what, if there was love then it would never go away...
Holly (82.34.160.81) -- Wednesday, April 6 2005, 10:24 pm

.

You know what I say: If I were the crying type that'd make me cry. ;)
Yann (82.19.1.176) -- Friday, April 8 2005, 07:53 pm

Makes me cry.

Beautiful like Raimee said. Touching.
morgy (84.64.72.111) -- Thursday, March 9 2006, 09:20 pm

thursday 9 march 06

i think that u should always love your mum & dad because it doesn 't matter how bad you have been they will always love u.you will also get love from your friends and other people but just have a heart and love your parents back because they love you.i think it is a beautiful poem and i couldn't of written it better.
renee (59.101.59.219) -- Friday, June 6 2008, 09:50 am

plz

may we plz use ur poem for my mum
lucy (82.1.200.77) -- Thursday, November 19 2009, 09:55 pm

please

please can i use this for my mum its her birthday :) ? x
rob (82.1.200.77) -- Thursday, November 19 2009, 09:57 pm

?

can i use thid please mate
lauren (86.27.216.175) -- Saturday, December 19 2009, 12:59 pm

so lovely

that poem is so cute/lovely your mum would love that
 
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