Week 10

[RinRin]

Mkay, i've thought about it, and this weeks topic is......

*drum roll*

Feeling useless or ignored! i know..a little depressing..but maybe it might be a challenge for some of you...or maybe none of you! but i'm sure everyone in the forum can relate to the subject, so give it your best!

Good luck, everyone!



*RinRin*

[Leah06]

oops... i wrote a poem but i dont think it will fit the usless ignored stuff.... Darnit. Ill try again.

[RinRin]

i wonder if Leah06 is the only one trying i hope i have at least two submissions to pick from!! otherwise...i'd either have no one...or just Leah...got about three days left, guys! ah, maybe i should've picked a different topic?

[me]

I think the weekly poem thing might be dropping off... participation almost died completely. Maybe we should take a break and start it back up later or try to get more people to join in. I would but I've been real busy lately. If i have time I'll submit... but I really really doubt you guys are picking tough topics lately.

[RinRin]

well..they don't really have to be tough do they?but you're right, it's been dropping off...oh well!

[Leah06]

k i cant come up with anything else but the one i origanally had so here it is:

Your Eyes


Every time I look into you eyes
I don’t only see them looking back at me
But I get lost.
I loose the time
Forget who I am without you
And become helpless.
Can’t move
Can’t breath
It’s like time has stopped.
Feeling venerable
Helpless
Weak.
I can’t even look away
Then realize
I don’t want to.
Only in your eyes
I forget my pain
Along with my past.
I want to stay there forever
Helpless
In your eyes.
And hope
I will never have
To blink.


its not that good but yea...

[Martin Vann]

Sometimes, I feel so alone, like on a sunny day, I don't even cast a shadow.
I can walk by a mirror yet, I see no reflection, sometimes I feel so alone, nothing but, rejection.

So, I ask my self, what have you done, to be incased in an empty urn?

Then I reply to my self, hey, its just your turn, Every-Body, has a lonely today,
today just happens to belong to me. Sad, I know, but hey, its nice to own SOMETHING?

MartinV

[bench]

The topics are quite difficult. Participation is not really dropping off. Okay here's my stab at the topic:


Bother Not

I hunger for your eyes.
They never look at me
The way they used to.
You only see my mistakes
And then you bother not to look.

I crave for your hands.
They never touch me
The way they used to.
You only touch my physical self
And then you bother not to touch.

I long for your ears.
They never hear me
The way they used to.
You only hear my problems
And then you bother not to listen.

I thirst for your mouth.
They never kiss me
The way they used to.
You only taste the bitterness
And then you bother not to kiss.

I seek for your company.
We've never ben together
The way we used to.
You abhor me for who I am
And then you bother not to see the real me.

[RinRin]

i can already tell i'm gonna have a tough time deciding!!!!! great poems guys!



*RinRin*

[Brenda Michelle]

well, here is my entrie, it is not for the contest though cause i already won last week... but here it is anyways.

Not Notcied

When I look strait ahead
people pass me by
not know that I stand there
not know that I exisit
Does this mean that I am dead?
That I am a sprit in the wind?
Or just another person
longing for a journy
to escape society
to escape humanity?
I would ask you all these simple questions
but I can't
Because you passed me by.